Yeah, yeah, I know that this forum doesn't encourage introductions, but I'm afraid this needs one. You see, this isn't my work. When a member of my forum wanted to join the fantasy rpg I run, I asked her/him to write a sample piece. I got this amazing piece. With the permission of the author, I am showing it to you. I hope you like it.
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she stared at her sword before entering the building. would she find the person who killed her family?
she fronwed as she placed her hand on the hilt staring into the fogged up windows as the wind blew snow around her. though her cloack hide her well, a string of purple hair managed to escape from under her wide brimed hat. she had lots of purple hair… it came from her mothers side of the family… she could still see her mothers dead eyes, glssed over as her severed head sat in a pool of blood…
her father’s side was where Anakiru got her magical, sparkling, silver eyes, for that was what the girls name was: Anakiru. her father, Hikago, was her best friend… before she found him laying dead along with her 12 siblings. Anakiru wished she had never left her families side that day… she could have saved them.
her eyes were not sparling when she busted into the tavern. she knew how to kill, and she was expected to use her skill against her families betrayer. Anakiru was sure to find him in this tavern. ever ready to fight, she took off her cloack, revealing her form, thin and strong clasted tightly in black leather outfit. this was not the attention Anakiru wanted… the person closet to her licked his green lips Anariku recognised him from before, his name was Jungu. she would kill him later, but now he might be useful. Anariku, walking up to Jungu, asking,
“have you seen lun here?” Jungu laughed cruely licking his green lips again and petting her on the leather costume on her arm. Jungu was knonw to favor any pretty oprhan girl: as a space pirate it was his dutry for most of his shipments to pick up and abuse at least one while crossing the galaxy.
“he has not been here for two days, and i have not seen him.” He said. A gust of win blew past Anariku, blowing her purple hair high up towards the ceiling. turning quickly she looked and squinting she turned back to Jungu.
“you lie.” She said as she sliced Jungu in half. *laughs* Anariku had used her favorite sword to kill him, the one that her eldest brother Kelmitso had given her. her other siblings had also each given her a sword, but Kelmitso, the warrior had given her the lightest sword. She was afraid to take Kelmisto’s place as a warrior, but she would do it she would avenge2 her family. she would use her fathers sword to kill the betrayer.
Lun. *thinks* I had been in love with you, how could you betray me? We felt so in love, but you turned it upsidedown. You will pay for this betrayal lover. *growl*
as she walked away from the body of Jungu, she looked up onto the second story balcony towards the bedrooms for the brothell. just as she did, she spotted Lun coming out of the room, his brown hair messy he was buttoning his shirt. In a spilt second Anariku had thrown a sword at him… but ducking it by inches Lun survived killing another person behind him. in the other half a second Lun had too thrown something at her… a black orb: a bomb!
there was a loud explosin as Lun broke through a window upstairs flying into snow.
“lol!” He said.
he had escaped. but was Anakiru still alive?
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