Young Writers Society

No Icaruss, you just made yourself sound stupid.
I'd just like to thank everybody for their criticism, THANKYOU!!!!
And Icaruss, please feel free to PM me. I'd like to talk to you!
Thanks again!

I remember writing something like this when I was 10 as well. The characters were Asterix, Don Quixote, Arnold Scwarzenegger and footballer Pele. But I'll have to hand it over to you because a team of your characters somehow seem more absurd..........That's what you were aiming for, right!? You know, what strikes me the most in the "Best 5..." is that nothing really leads up to anything. Like there were no melodramatic sentences at all leading upto Muhammad Ali's death. He just .....died.
Tell me if I am wrong, but it looks like you were under the impression of " A Leauge of Extraordinary Gentlemen" pretty deeply.
Would you please elaborate a bit on Jack Lewis because even though his appearance is short-lived, he really seems to be a character.
As far as description goes, I do not think it needs any more. It sounds so child-like and mature at the same time.