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Thanks a lot fishr, I'll get to fixing those errors.
Also, with the jaw-snapping part; if you went to take a large bite out of something and missed, wouldnt your teeth click together painfully? I know mine would.
As to wether it could become a book...it has the potential thats for sure, and i may (later on) even give it a go, right now however, im just writing it for your and my own entertainment.
There's always that possibilty though.

Thanks a lot, ppl.

Also, with the jaw-snapping part; if you went to take a large bite out of something and missed, wouldnt your teeth click together painfully? I know mine would.

Aw, ok. I guess I didn't make that connection. My bad.

Thanks a lot fishr, I'll get to fixing those errors.

It's my...er... our job. You're welcome.