I wrote this for a Humanities class last year. I love throwing a twist on commonly accepted stories. I would love to learn other people's views on this, so please comment!
I lay, eyes wide near the feet of my Lord Beowulf. I could tell by the quickness of his breathing that he was as awake as I. I’m pretty sure that we were the only ones who hadn’t gotten drunk on Hrothgar’s famous golden mead.
Trembling, I drew my blankets around me, lightly touching the hilt of the sword that the merciful hero had given to me. This was when he had found me, a young orphan boy only ten years of age, among the armor on his ship in the middle of the ocean. When I had proclaimed and sworn ultimate loyalty to him, should I be allowed to accompany him, and ever be at his side.
“Wulfgar,” I heard the mighty hero murmur. I sat up. He had already assumed a sitting position. “Listen.” I obeyed. A heavy thumping was approaching the hall of Hrothgar, very quickly. “Wulfgar-----” The door suddenly shuddered ferociously. All of Heorot groaned. Beowulf pushed me out of the way just as the heavy door flew into the hall, landing in the exact place that I had been laying only a second before. I froze.
The most hideous monster I had ever seen had burst through the gaping doorway. Its red eyes flashed angrily. I scurried out of the way as Beowulf leaped to his feet. The monster, Grendel, roared in laughter. Not seeing the golden and strong form of my master, it reached a hairy, enormous arm out and lifted a slumber-some thane, and ate him. I could have been sick, but foolishly let out a feeble cry of dismay instead. It didn’t hear me. Instead, it reached for the praised hero, Beowulf, who was as stunned as I upon seeing the thane killed so.
Well aware that timing was everything, I hurled the nearest thing that I could lift at it, a drinking horn. It looked at me, and, distracted from its previous prey, my master, it turned on me. I shrieked.
Somehow, my cry must have shook Beowulf from his trance, because one moment Death and I are locked in each other’s gaze, and the next my lord, my savior, my glorious care-taker, was grappling with the hand that would have seized me.
The thanes were all awake now, though still groggy with drunkenness, but bewildered. No one, save my master and the beast, moved.
I admired my master. His superhuman strength surely compared to that of a god’s, and he was even a match, perhaps more, for Grendel. The true colors of my master shown through then, and I realized how unworthy I was to even kneel before him.
Grendel cried out mournfully in fear and pain as his bones began to break, and his skin began to tear. Seeing a small line of blood from a widening cut on the top of his shoulder, I sprang into action. Snatching up the sword that Beowulf had given to me,, I leapt onto a table that had not been over turned by the fight, and from there leapt the twelve feet to Grendel’s monstrous shoulder. With a triumphant bellow, I plunged the sword into the wound, and moved it vigorously from side to side, ripping muscle, sawing bone. Finally after a few fleeting seconds of this, Beowulf gave a last mighty heave, and ripped the monster’s arm from its socket.
The monster beneath me moaned, and I just lay in a relieved stupor there on his shoulder; covered in blood, and clutching the sword with white knuckles. Then Grendel ran out the empty doorway, and left me in a grimy heap on the floor. Beowulf was at my side in an instant.
“Wulfgar.” He said, looking me in the eye, pride and admiration sparkling in his. “You saved me twice over this night, boy. You have surely proven your worth. Had you not loosened the flesh for me, I might still be battling with the monster yet. It is an honor to have so valiant a lad serving me. Together we have conquered.”
“Aye,” I said slowly and hesitantly, still somewhat smarting from the fall off Grendel’s shoulder. “But you’ll be the one who’s remembered.”
He smiled down at me. “True. But I’ll always remember you.”
And as he helped me to my feet, and waved his trophy aloft, I smiled too. We stood there, cheering thanes and wenches surrounding us. My master grinned down at me again. My hero was proud of me.
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