Young Writers Society

With a gray hood over my I couldn't see anything, but that was the least of my problems. (Add eyes in there)

My hands were feeling soft and wet, almost as if they out in the sun, my legs were resting on a hump of furniture, They were in their normal condition, they felt like legs because they weren't tied up like my hands, this gave me an advantage to run. But where? (Period after sun, after furniture, and after condition. Comma before because. Period after hands.

"Where is it Michael? Is it here" Said a faded voice. (Comma after it. Question mark after here.)

"She is here Sir". Replied the man he was talkin to. (Comma after here. Period inside the quotation)

I didn't want to wait for the event to go further, I really didn't want to be apart of it so I'm trying my best to get out of it.
I so don't understand this line)
I rolled on my back and on to the floor with a thud.
(Maybe and landed on the floor with a thud.)
'Ouch" As I got up two pairs of black converses were tapping in my front of my face.

"Well ,well, well, I guess I found our runaway trying to, well runaway".

i had no idea what I was in for. (Capital I.)