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Tue Jan 08, 2008 1:36 am
Sleeping Valor says...



Nice story. Automatically has my seal of aproval because the vampire is funny. *hugs vampires* Var var amusing. I have only one question...

“You're a creepy bastard, you know it?”


...isn't that suposed to be "You're a creepy bastard, you know that?"

(Maybe it's just me since that's how I'm most used to seeing it phrased)

There's more, right?
  





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Tue Jan 08, 2008 2:38 am
Doctor Kitty says...



There'll be more... eventually.
  








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