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What is your first line for NaNo 2023?



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Thu Nov 02, 2023 3:15 am
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keystrings says...



I made a thread for this last year so I figured I’d get the conversation started this year as well! Happy start of NaNo 2023!

My first line:

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Summer break started with a whimper, not a bang.
name: key/string/perks
pronouns: she/her/hers and they/them/theirs


novel: the clocktower (camp nano apr 24)
poetry: the beauty of the untold (napo 2024)
  





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IcyFlame says...



My first line:

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I breathe what can only be described as a sigh of relief when the barista finally passes the cup of iced coffee over the counter and I can take a long, life-saving sip.
  





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LadyMysterio says...



My first line!
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The sweet smell of donuts mingled with the sterile smell of the new BMW as James opened the donut box.
I know my worth, anyone else opinion doesn't really matter
-Agent Carter
  





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Spearmint says...



=D
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Valencia Heartwood loved watching live-streamed quests.
mint, she/her


.--. / ... ...- -.-. .-.. / - .--. ..- .- / .--- --- ...- .--- / .--- --- .--. .-- / .--. .--- .-.. / .--- -.-- .-.. .... -
=D
  





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Voidsoul says...



First sentence of the book:
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“Did you hear the news?”
Which is very boring


First sentence I probably wrote for NaNo:
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The alley was empty except for the shattered glass on the ground from a nearby window and the woman I was following—the immortal who was soon to die.
*dances randomly and hands you a cosmic brownie*
  





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Snoink says...



Spoiler! :
If Prince Tristian hadn’t walked through the King’s Garden that day, nobody would have known about the bird.
Ubi caritas est vera, Deus ibi est.

"The mark of your ignorance is the depth of your belief in injustice and tragedy. What the caterpillar calls the end of the world, the Master calls the butterfly." ~ Richard Bach

Moth and Myth <- My comic! :D
  








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