This is a short story I wrote for english class over a girl in the Halocaust. Please tell me what you think!
...
I closed my eyes, trying to remember spring. Fresh clean breezes come to mind, along with with small wildflowers bringing spurts of color to the lush green grass. My mother would run side by side with my brother through the fields of color. She would fall to the ground, laughing as Bill would beat her to the edge of the wildflowers. Father and I would sit on the picnic blanket, nibbling on ham sandwiches. The sun would set over the horizon of trees, lighting up the sky like a painting. Blues, pinks, oranges would swirl around the clouds, hitching rides on the wind.
A door slam brought me out of my daydream. Anna walked through the door, brown paper bags in her hand. "Krystall?" Her voice rang through the empty room, bounching off the walls.
I sighed, "Krystall's gone. She's destroyed and broken. My old life is non-existant now. Mother, Father, Bill... All gone. My old self went with them. I'm Eva now. I don't have anyone."
Anna sat the bags down in the corner, "You have me, Krys- Eva. You have your life. That's what's important."
I turned to face her, "But what about the rest of the people who've lost theirs? What about my family's lifes? Mother? Father? Bill? Their lives were important too. They were the people that deserved to live. I wasn't lucky to not be home when the Nazis came. When they killed my family. You call that luck to be left all alone?"
Anne sighed. She leaned over into one of the bags and pulled out a small stuffed bunny. Slowly she walked over to me, handing me it. " I think this was yours."
My eyes gazed upon a old , torn bunny. Mr. Jumper was a bunny I had been given when I was two. I closed my eyes and handed her it back. "My old life is dead. I don't need any reminders."
Anna pursed her lips and grabbed the bunny back. " You can't live like this forever."
My eyes blinked opened as I said, "Watch me." Anna stepped back and looked out the window. "Anna, I'm tired of hiding. I'm tired of never being to go outside, feel the wind in my hair. And on the rare occasions that I happen to be outside, I'm sheltered. I know that someone from my old life could recgonize me, but I'm confined. I don't cry anymore. I don't even feel anymore. I sit on this bed day and night, watching the tan walls for any chance of change. I used to wish that things could go back to normal. Have a mother and father and brother that loved me again. That were alive again. Do you know what it's like going home to ashes. The flames reached up to the roof, envolping the house like a hungry beast. And I just stood there, watching the flames burn. Watching my life burn. They got what they wanted. They took three more Jews out of this world. But did they have to take the three people that meant the most to me? I remember Mother's playful smile as she would walk down the street, me in her arms. Father's jokes were so silly that they could make anybody laugh. Bill was the best big brother a girl could ever had. And me? I used to have a voice. I used to had family and friends and happy life. But now? I'm lost."
Anna sighed, " Krystall..." I looked at her. "Eva." She corrected, "Honey, you are alive. That's what matters." I shrugged, setting my head on my pillow. Anna walked toward the door, stopping just before the handle. "Happy Seventh Birthday, Krys- Eva."
She walked out of the door, closing it behind her. Tears fell like rivlets from my eyes for the first time in three years. Seven? Isn't that supposed to a lucky number?
Gender:
Points: 1694
Reviews: 14