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The missing "and"??



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Tue Oct 30, 2007 9:44 am
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SishBee says...



Hey!

I really need some help!

What is the technical term for using a comma instead of an "and"

e.g. The cat was called Sam, it was sat on the mat.

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Tue Oct 30, 2007 8:27 pm
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Leja says...



The cat was called Sam, it sat on the mat.


I'm a little confused... there shouldn't be a comma here. If anything, there should be a semicolon --> "...called Sam; it sat on the mat" because there are two phrases that could stand independently as sentences. This doesn't happen if there's just a comma there, unless there's a conjunction along with it (and, but, or, nor, etc.).

So I guess the technical term is a semicolon? Though that doesn't seem so technical...
  





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Tue Oct 30, 2007 8:43 pm
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Cade says...



The sentence you gave as an example is, as Melja pointed out, incorrect. It's called a comma splice if that's what you're looking for.

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Tue Oct 30, 2007 8:52 pm
Twit says...



What is a comma splice? Example? :?
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Tue Oct 30, 2007 9:51 pm
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Sureal says...



'The cat was called Sam, it was sat on the mat.' is a comma splice.
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Tue Oct 30, 2007 9:57 pm
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Leja says...



Twit: when there are two phrases that should have a conjunction between them but don't. Wikipedia has some good examples: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Comma_splice
  





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Thu Nov 01, 2007 8:39 pm
scotty.knows says...



Correct usage of a comma: The cat, called Sam, sat on a mat.
Or: The cat, who sat on a mat, was called Sam.
Or: Sam, a cat, sat on a mat.
Or: The cat, who was called by the marjority of unsaid persons as Sam, sat on the mat.
Or: Upon the mat sat a cat... No, forget that last one.
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