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Twilight - A Reality.



Should there be more?

Yes! Bella should become a vamp.
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68%
Eh, no thanks. Good work, though!
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32%
 
Total votes : 38


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Wed Oct 13, 2010 2:11 am
Celticmusicgirl says...



lemme start off by saying good job on this it really makes you think "wow what if edward hadn't been brought up as a vegetarian vampire?" it was pretty cool. i love the whole series and this is an interesting piece go ahead and write more. Just remember it is best to have fun when you are writing something like this. If you enjoyed writing this then readers will most likely enjoy reading it.
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Wed Oct 13, 2010 4:44 pm
Sandvich says...



Magicweaver14 wrote:That was some crap!!! I hated it im going to put my story on here and put urs to shame!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hahahahahhahahhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhaaaaahahahahaha!!!!!








Im not mean i just love writing!!!


Unsuccessful troll is unsuccessful.

Anyway, it took me a while to bring myself to click on this, but when I did... what a pleasant surprise. I liked the way Edward acted like a proper vampire, although to make this more realistic, he should have died the instant he stepped into the sun. :P (Jokes)

As you can see, I'm not one for long reviews. :P
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