:):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):) Hehe. I'm an in bewtweener but that was still really funny! I think everyone was to busy laughing to tell exactly when 'Edward" came in. Could you clear that up? Perfect ending!!!!
I have loved the words and I have hated them. I only hope I have made them right.
Hi there! As requested, I won't go in-depth and review it randomly. I'll just give you my thoughts.
It was funny, very good parody. The movie title was awesome, I actually want to go see that now that I think about it. I can't really give this a serious review, but it was great, and had some truth to it. Good job!
Sporks
Grasped by the throat, grasped by the throat. That's how I feel about love. That it's not worth it.
wow that was pretty interesting i'll admit! I am actually in love with the twilight saga but this was still pretty funny! really all i saw was one or two misspellings here and there but otherwise it was interesting! i do like that incredibly long movie title. Overall: i liked it. it was a good teaser. very funny. Good Job! you got very creative with this! you should never lose creativity. and always remember: when writing have fun! because if you have fun writing ur story then most likely the readers will have just as much fun reading it!
"No life is forever. We found and fought here. We loved and died here... The crops whither and the bones of hunger walk the sunken roads... The land has failed us... In dance and song we gift and mourn our children. They carry us over the ocean in dance and song. -American Wake by Riverdance
I personally have never liked Edward (he was either creepy or annoying or a mix of both), but now I can't help but feel sorry for the poor guy... This was fantastic and completely over-the-top- good stuff!
"I didn't lie! I was writing fiction with my mouth!" -Homer Simpson
HAHA! I laughed so hard. If you hate twilight watch Alex Reads Twilight on YouTube. It's super funny. Jenn
when you grow up you realize that Prince Charming is not as easy to find as you thought. You realize the bad guy is not wearing a black cape and he's not easy to spot; he's really funny, and he makes you laugh, and he has perfect hair and isnt wearing a black cape and easy to spot Lots of Love Jenn
Oh my god! This was really great! I'm a huge fan of Twilight and that made me laugh super hard. Its very true about most girls and their obsession. I'll have you know that I am NOT like that though
...or dear Bellatrix, who likes to play with her food before she eats it? Fear makes the wolf seem bigger. I got attacked by a swan.
Oh my God, that's the most hilarious Twifanfic I've ever read! Laughed out loud so many times, and I just loved it. Very nice writing techniques and balanced dialogue. All mistakes I've spotted were pointed out by previous reviews, so no need to blurt them out again. Very humorous, quirky, laughable weather you're a Twifan or Hater (personally I'm Switzerland). Keep up the good work and I'd love to see what you might write in the future! Oh my God, that's the most hilarious Twifanfic I've ever read! Laughed out loud so many times, and I just loved it. Very nice writing techniques and balanced dialogue. All mistakes I've spotted were pointed out by previous reviews, so no need to blurt them out again. Very humorous, quirky, laughable weather you're a Twifan or Hater (personally I'm Switzerland). Keep up the good work and I'd love to see what you might write in the future!
Oh my God, that's the most hilarious Twifanfic I've ever read! Laughed out loud so many times, and I just loved it. Very nice writing techniques and balanced dialogue. All mistakes I've spotted were pointed out by previous reviews, so no need to blurt them out again. Very humorous, quirky, laughable weather you're a Twifan or Hater (personally I'm Switzerland). Keep up the good work and I'd love to see what you might write in the future!
Honestly, I thought it was hilarious. Well written and totally creative. Including with the name of the movie in the beginning. Very creative. Good job! -Kadi
“I'm selfish, impatient and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control and at times hard to handle. But if you can't handle me at my worst, then you sure as helldon't deserve me at my best.” - Marilyn Monroe
"would you still love me if i was a worm"
yeah babe i would AND id get you your own compost bin so we could enter gardening competitions together — Corvid
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