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Harry Potter, Voldemort and a cookie.



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Tue Oct 04, 2011 6:46 am
Lavvie says...



funkymomo wrote:Hermoine not Hermonie.


It's actually Hermione.


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Sun Nov 13, 2011 9:53 pm
wewinwelose says...



Haha this is hilarious, I've seen a lot of short jokes like this before. I am a total Potterhead and admin on a few FB pages about it, so I find this extra funny due to the simple fact that I've seen it before XD. Great job, it was hilarious, and the sad part is you got the fight scene almost identical to the normal ones....0.o.
Either way, just wanted to point out that it's spelled "Expelliarmus." Also, It's Voldy :). At least, that's how I've always seen it. Not being a Harmony (Harry and Hermione) fan, I couldn't agree with the whole "he was looking for his love" thing, but it was still cute :). Again, that was really funny, and now I think I want a cookie.
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Sun Dec 18, 2011 2:18 am
lili024 says...



Muahahahahaha you are a genios ;)
The forbbiden forest should be in capital letters.
And its hermione not hermone
Lili
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Sun Jan 15, 2012 11:53 pm
mantisrox says...



Some spelling errors, and a ship.... Other than that, most excellent!
  








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