Hello! I actually haven't finished the series--I'm on Catching Fire--but the way you wrote this made it very easy to understand what I missed. I'm impressed. Nice work! I say that after reading all the ways that you can improve from other people, this piece will be practially perfect. Like my writing teacher Mrs. Yattoni says, "Writing is never finished. There's always more that can make it better."
Happy writing!
-Lauren
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