I know it's shaky and I still need to work on it, but I would like some input. Please and thankyou.
At the moment of your birth
Your death warrant was signed
The date boldly printed
On an invisible line.
Though the witness reads clear,
Behind it lay a voice
That you will one day hear.
"You're dead now," He explains
Pointing one finger into his claim.
"I must make room for more,
There are new babies to be born."
"But I'm not done with life," is your reply.
"I am not at all ready to die."
"I don't care," He'll sternly say.
"It's my choice, life goes my way."
Suddenly, he'll snatch your wrist
And give it a hard, painful twist.
"But shouldn't I have a say as it's my own?"
You ask, "like when to come and when to go?"
He looks at you from deep with in,
His strength is great, yet His build is thin.
His lips curl upward, he breathes in deep.
You look away. You try not to weep.
"You are a man, a shameful race.
My greatest work? Ha! What a disgrace!?
"You have your stories, and take them for truth
And you're selfish and greedy, all of you!
"I gave you that mind to help others along
But all you've done is proven me wrong!
"You think you're loved and honored by me?
Well I have news for you- you'll never be!"
You hang you're head. You silently cry.
And let go of a beautiful lie.
"They said you were caring," you say.
"They said you loved all, and always forgave."
He tugs your arm, starting to laugh.
"No," he says, "I feel nothing but wrath.
"Understand, a human does not matter to me
I am God, and you are not free."
Then he pulls you past the gate,
Away from earth, and forever astray.
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