So this is a new poem i've written where i'm trying to incorporate sound into my writing which is a lot more difficult then it would first seem to be in a poem. Obviously it still has a lot of room for improvement, Thanks guys!
I'm Watching the clock
go tick tock, tick tock.
Waiting for forever to come around.
It's a quater past never,
I've been waiting for forever
why won't forever ever come around.
And the Clock is still ticking,
its irksome clicking.
Always going tick tock, tick tock.
Clickedy clock, tickedy tock
It's ten till forever,
I'm still waiting for whomever
and all i'm hearing
is the clicking of my clock
go tick tock, tick tock.
TuckEr EllsworTh
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