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Walking to New Orleans (Remix of Fats Domino's song)



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Tue Dec 14, 2004 3:23 am
Sylfester says...



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Fri Dec 24, 2004 8:00 am
Nate says...



I've never heard Fat Domino's song, but I thought this was really well done. There's a nice beat to it all throughout, and it flows well. All in all, this was a cool poem to read.
  








I lingered round them, under that benign sky: watched the moths fluttering among the heath and harebells, listened to the soft wind breathing through the grass, and wondered how any one could ever imagine unquiet slumbers for the sleepers in that quiet earth.
— Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights