That Can't Be Jesus, Where's the Crown?
I look back in time to Jerusalem,
Encompassed by a wall as thick as the earth,
The fire of God burns as candle-light,
Dusty-footed children play happily,
Jerusalem Unbeatable,
The City of David,
The Land of the Lord,
In its walls lies a Rabbi,
Hated by all,
Except the taxmen,
He's the Pub-Preacher, bar Bishop,
Ha, He's just another cult leader,
But my Messiah comes with a sword!
Riding the clouds, and cloud coloured horse,
He slays the sinners!
He wrecks the wicked, plunders the politicians!
O, where is my Messiah?
Jesus Christ of Nazareth?
And back to reality I see a lady... a woman,
Skin tight shirt,
Mini-skirt, high-riding stockings,
Passionate lip-stick smeared over fat lips,
She breathes from her mouth,
Slowly, chest in and out...
Urgh. I begin to walk away,
But then I see the Rabbi,
In a tattered T and ragged jeans,
Sitting by the woman,
He says,
“Good morning ma'am,
How are you today?”
Her smile, she will always be beautiful,
That is all I'll say,
An angel in lingerie,
Five months later I meet Him in the street,
Chaped lips and tear stains on His shirt,
I offer him something to get a drink,
“Please no, rather tip me with your company.”
The Rabbi has been around the world,
And has now returned home,
To see his friend – the prostitute,
One last time,
His words string out like a poem,
His eyes are rich like oceans,
And indeed mine water like them,
His name was Jesse Christophers,
Then one day when I was the beggar,
The fraud out of jail,
Lying on the roadside,
Waiting for my death,
Abandoned by my Messiah,
There comes Jesse,
Tattered T and ragged jeans,
He tells me He didn't have to go forever after all,
And he's in town for three more days,
So up and down the town we'll go,
To visit our friends the harlots and frauds,
The gangmen and cons,
The priests and paupers,
My Messiah and I,
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Oh dear, the edit makes me feel sad because Snoink and Nyiiri liked the previous version. But I'm pretty sure I don't want to be so harsh in my language anymore, so I've changed this to be more narrative. If there's a mod reading, please move this (or PM me on how I can move it myself ).
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