Take note that during the writing of this poem, I wasn't your most happiest person, so I really had no plan in my head of what it was going to be structured like. Sure I may have wanted to add extra words, but I felt a little bit offended when you wrote BAD TRANSITION under the first verse. You may not have intended that, but I did feel a tiny bit annoyed about the fact that I wrote this very personal poem and you call it's transition from first verse to next 'bad'. I am sorry if you are confused about that...but I think a better word should have been used. I also felt that it wasn't really fitting how you added an extra line in the last verse. I understand that you are only trying to be helpful, but it is my poem, and I don't appreciate it when someone adds their own line to my poem because I feel that isn't right. I am sorry if it seems I am being snappy and totally ungreatful of your review, but maybe next time suggest another line rather than actually doing it. I was hurt writing this poem. To call a simple transition bad to me makes me a little upset.
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