Young Writers Society

Basically I thought this had kind of an interesting idea, particularly because usually poems tend to be the reverse of this (ie. "Don't be fooled by my smile, I'm miserable on the inside"). Instead it was "Ignore the fact that I'm obviously upset, because at least you make me happy." I don't know what the secret message is here and I don't want to revise it out of this because I love stuff like that, but I would've liked to see a little more depth overall. On the other hand, I really do like the fact that it's not the cliche poem of teenage angst that we always see.
Keep writing,
StoryWeaver

I liked the fact that you did it that what, but I love it the way it is. I think you did amazing on it. It was short sweet and to the point, just the way I like it. haha.
Keep it up, cause I loved it and am going to look forward to more of your writing.

Sincerely,
Ciara<3

That what was supposed to be way in the first sentence. Oops.