Young Writers Society

Glowing fire, hear it roar.
Arching glass, hitting shore.
Reflecting all your troubled pasts,
Take it in, while it lasts.
Never staying for too long.
Nothing here is ever wrong.
Then it curls, and then it’s gone,
To come again in early dawn

You described the images of nature, while inserting emotions and thoughts between the lines. Overall it's pretty good.

Wow, this was quite impressive. Even though it was short, I had to read it a couple times to get it in my head. It was very beautiful and had a nice flow to it. The imagery was also great too. Keep up the awesome work!

Waves are pretty much my favourite thing to write about, so I really like this.

Arching glass hitting shore

Genius.

One thing though. This needs punctuation, desperately. It just doesn't flow well the way that it is, and without punctuation it's just one long sentence. The end of the line doesn't equal a full stop. That said, it does have a rhythm that I like. Each sentence is so short, but with the rhyming it actually works.

It's good imagery and a nice sentiment, with 'Nothing here is ever wrong'. I really like that.

Good writing!

Hey there-
Oh man. I'm not sure where to begin. I thought this was pure genious. So original. There is so much life.
It flows. It is obvious what you are writing about, since you put in plainly in the title, but over the original picture that the audience has of a wave, you paint more detail and emotion.
I loved it.
Awesome.
Keep it up!!
-IamHathor22

love it