Hey everyone! This is just a totally random poem i wrote but i kinda like the sound of it. Anyways i am really happy to say I THINK I DIDN'T MESS UP ANYTHING GRAMMAR WISE! Which is kind a huge accomplishment for me and my severely dyslexic self. Anyways, just a side note... I really don't like the sound of the 4th stanza. But i dont know how to fix it. Please help! Well enjoy!!!!!
You are a Phantom it seems,
that saunters my dreams.
Wandering the lonely night,
we've lost all our light.
Snowflakes descend from the sky,
as I hear a muffled cry.
I watch her stride with effortless grace.
Tears fall from her pale face.
She walks with a single rose,
carrying all our woes.
Her silver hair shimmers and shines,
around her beautiful face that it entwines.
The gentle snow turns to a blizzard,
making my world quiver,
with sorrow and grief
that we use to believe.
A tears falls from her face
to find its place,
amongst a frozen river,
where it lies... forgotten... forever.
She drifts away from me,
dropping our rose as she
smilies and fades away.
Maybe I'll see you again, somehow, someday.
Our rose use to shine
with our love and beauty divine.
Now, our rose so red,
is wilted and dead.
TuckEr EllsworTh
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