Young Writers Society

What is 13?

a number
a curse
a girl

A female
a person
an aqiantance

a friend
a best friend
a love

not lonely like 1
not lucky like 7
but a little odd like 5

shes curious
but vial
shes optimistic
but tempting
shes beautiful

shes my 13
my unlikely favorite

You spelled aquaintance wrong, and I'm not completely sure I spelled it right, so you'll have to check that. I like the first part, but I'm not sure you pull it all together at the end. Good job though, I always liked short-lined poems and you have a nice rhythm.Hope this helps!