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Cowgirl Casanova



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Points: 336
Reviews: 30
Wed Jan 25, 2012 5:32 pm
VampireSenshi says...



Spoiler! :
I was listening to the orginal and thought it would be cool to edit it so a guy could sing it and not sound weird...


You better take it from me, that girl is like a disease
You’re running, you’re trying, you’re trying to hide
And you’re wondering why you can’t get free
She's like a curse, she’s like a drug
You get addicted to her love
You wanna get out but she’s holding you down
‘Cause you can’t live without one more touch

She’s a good time cowgirl casanova
Leaning up against the record machine
Looks like a cool drink of water
But she’s sugar-coated misery
She’s the devil in disguise
A snake with blonde hair
And she only comes out at night
Gives you feelings that you don’t want to fight
You better run for your life

I see that look on your face
You ain’t hearing what I say
So I’ll say it again
‘Cause I know where you been
And I know how it ends
You can’t get away
Don’t even look in her eyes
She’ll tell you nothing but lies
And you wanna believe
But you won’t be deceived
If you listen to me
And take my advice

She’s a good time cowgirl casanova
Leaning up against the record machine
Looks like a cool drink of water
But she’s sugar-coated misery
She’s the devil in disguise
A snake with blonde hair
And she only comes out at night
Gives you feelings that you don’t want to fight
You better run for your life
Run run away

Don’t let her mess with your mind
She’ll tell you anything you want to hear
She’ll break your heart
It’s just a matter of time
But just remember

She’s a good time cowgirl casanova
Leaning up against the record machine
Looks like a cool drink of water
But she’s sugar-coated misery
She’s the devil in disguise
A snake with blonde hair
And she only comes out at night
Gives you feelings that you don’t want to fight
You better run for your life

Oh you better run for your life (2)
<YWS>
<NE1>

NIGHT is always watching...
  





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Wed Jan 25, 2012 6:58 pm
stargazer9927 says...



I love the original song to this. Did you just change the perpective? Without changing any other lyrics? I don't know the lyrics perfectly so I can't tell.
Let's eat mom.
Let's eat, mom.
Good grammar saves lives :D
  





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Wed Jan 25, 2012 7:27 pm
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VampireSenshi says...



What i did essentialy is i chaned the perspective be switching all of the he's into she's and changing some but not all of the lyrics.
<YWS>
<NE1>

NIGHT is always watching...
  





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Wed Jan 25, 2012 8:10 pm
stargazer9927 says...



I figured. Still interesting though.
Let's eat mom.
Let's eat, mom.
Good grammar saves lives :D
  








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