Hey! Review day review
I liked your poem the subject of children being amazed with the simplest things is such and intresting subject to explore!
Now you used the word "purple" quite a bit. Try going for different shades of purple, or maybe some ddifferent colours.
Now I'm not really sure what you're trying to say by this piece. Is it that children grow up to fast? Because that's the feeling I got from reading this.
So overall I liked your use of imagery in this poem, just remember to vary it and try to be clearer with what you're trying to say.
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