Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
Anyway let's get right to it,
"Love at first sight is for dummies", I remember telling my friend as she spoke about her summer fling. It was the summer of 2008, at least the end of it and we had just gotten back from our summer break. Since I had just gotten back from India, I was completely tanned and full of new experiences. After the routine of hugging and complimenting each other on our "new looks", we waited eagerly for prey: the newcomers (sounds mean. doesn't it?) The newcomers were like the gazelles, always scared and waiting to bolt from the rest of us. So they came in. They were two of them. With big, scared eyes and nervous, trembling hands. And then you came in. Time just stopped. At least to me. You were the most beautiful person I had ever seen. Tall, confident and absolutely stunning, you grabbed the attention of the entire class. You started introducing yourself. That perfect voice, I could listen to you all day. And then suddenly it was over. I was snapped back into reality as my friend nudged me. Everyone in the class was clapping and I joined in, dazed. You smiled at us. And that's when I knew. I was completely in love with you.
Hmm, well this one starts off with a very interesting first line there for something that currently has this title...almost makes you a little apprehensive to read it knowing that whatever wholesomeness lies within this doesn't survive till the end of the story.
At any rate, I love the little ironic nod of how this person totally dismissed the notion of a love at first sight before they end up falling into the same thing themselves...in what is actually a pretty nice little scene here. We've got the setting being laid down...in just about enough detail that it can be pictured relatively easily here...and then of course we have the actual moment, which manages to come out pretty wholesome there. It definitely seems like the million other similar scenes we've all run into in movies but to me at least those scenes are never going to fail to be awesome so this one works quite well.
At any rate, I think this is a lovely little start here, there's always the sense of impending doom as well what with the title of this piece..so definitely an interesting piece here and perhaps something I would actually continue reading here.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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