Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
First Impression: A pretty intriguing chapter one here...I think it manages to capture most of the sort of thing that you want to have in a first chapter...and it manages to really do a pretty good job here....you'd definitely get my attention as a reader with this chapter.
Anyway let's get right to it,
I don't understand why they made me go on this stupid vacation. I just wanted to relax over my summer break, but no! We had to go take a trip to someplace in Europe. I begged my parents to let me stay home, but they remember what happened last time.
Okay...starting off with a bit of a rant about a vacation there....that's not something you see too often, especially with a title that's as mysterious as the one on this particular piece...well it certainly managed to get my attention pretty quickly here...I have a feeling this vacation that the protagonist didn't want will end up plunging them in whatever this lost island is going to be.
As my parents were walking to the car to go to the airport, the house started smoking and the next thing I knew, is we were loading up the moving truck.
Okay...that looks like what happened that previous time this person was left alone...and from what I can see, it appears that the house burned down or something along those lines..which is....well, definitely a viable excuse for the parents deciding to not leave them at home...not to mention, being able to burn able to burn a whole house down single-handedly in the time the parents get to loading the car, is quite an accomplishment.
So anyway, as we boarded the plane I was on my IPhone chatting to my best friend friend about how terrible this vacation was going to be. And my mom just swipes my phone out of my hand and tells me to read a book on the plane. I was in disbelief. How could she make me read a book on summer break! I start to complain and she tells me to "Zip it!" She hands me a book called the rules of survival. "This is a book about surviving in the wild and all sorts of stuff like that" she explains to me. "Why am do I need to read this?" I ask. "Because it teaches you a lesson you will never learn in school" she tells me.
Okay...I have a feeling this book is going to come in quite handy with the direction that this story appears to be headed in and I can't help but think that the parents are actually planning this out rather than the adventure being accidental, also you get a nice sense of the protagonist's personality here through these interactions with the parents and I think that's a pretty neat touch there.
We find our seats, and I stare at the cover of the book. It has a middle-aged man with vivid colors of trees around him. I open the cover to find different surviving techniques and I continue to read until I finish. "How was the book, Christina?" my mom asks. "It was fine, but I don't understand what lesson it gave me" I say. She just smiles and we both fall asleep, then I feel the air getting hotter and the plane falling.
Oh perhaps...this will be an accident after all, cause a feeling like that can only mean this plane is about to crash down somewhere...and well, that can only mean that this plane is going down...which by the way also makes for an awesome little cliffhanger here and those are always fun. At any rate, a lovely choice of ending here.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
Overall: Overall, a pretty neat start to a story here, this definitely seems like a pretty cool story here, and one that I think I would actually read. Anyway, that's about all I've gotta say for now.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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