Hello, I am here to send a review/comment about your poem. Merci is a beautiful word yet you make it more beautiful writing this piece.
The first line made an impact of being catchy, making your readers more captivated to read the work. The repetitive words made melodies grow out of my mouth as I read each word, repeating them. The meaning is well-expressed. Your gratitude toward friends are written in lyrics which makes them lucky to be your friend.
Merci you stood by my side,
Merci you are with me every day and night, every day and night.
Merci, Merci.
Friends are your biggest treasure,
Don't measure them, don't measure them.
Your friends will stand with you,
Without any doubt, without any second thought about you.
Throughout your journey, your friends are your key.
Merci, Merci.
Your friends will bend for you,
Your friends will spend weekends with you.
Your friends will stay with you till the end.
Merci, Merci.
Thank you for sharing a very beautiful poem!
-AkuRashomon
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