Hello! I'm Ava
The title of this poem immediately caught my attention and something told me that I had to read this.
Reading this piece felt like the loud silence after a thunderous storm. That kind of storm which made you lose something you'd given your life to.
The loud silence is unsettling and that makes you want to return back to how everything was usually. But it felt like you're lost and you can't find a way back. You're trapped in the loud silence. It's loud but it's silent too.
If only you could hear something that would lead you back to finding your lost life. You expressed you're desperation and frustration to end the games that you're emotions are playing with you very precisely.
Your flow is smooth and the word choice is powerful and it renders the emotions you seek to express strongly.
Thank you for this beautiful piece. I hope you find the voice you're yearning for.
Have a great day!
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