Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
Anyway let's get right to it,
When low you forget to look high. When high you forget to look higher and instead look down getting terrified. Trudging through the hole you created you miss the next step you created thinking it’ll be okay skipping this one. What you find out is, you misplaced your footing and hang placement, consequently, looking up from the ground, numbed. Slowly as you start getting up, setting yourself up for the next attempt, you just decide to brush off all the dust; breathing as much life you can muster. Feeling defeated, you tell yourself internally “I will only focus on the next step releasing everything else until I can get from this hole and I won’t get hurt this time.”
Oooh this is quite the start right here, especially to a piece with a title like life. Definitely the kind of thing that gets you thinking. I think that's a very well done intro right there just capturing this lovely essence of the idea that you're trying to present. I think its a lovely way to start off proceedings. Let's see where we're headed next.
The classic saying is —-“Take baby steps.”—- This is a wonderful thought but what happens when a rattlesnake starts rattling when you get near that step? Staying calm instead of being rash or harsh decisions could potentially get yourself killed. Why would anyone do this? You can either have poison rushing through your veins or be tugged again by the overwhelming fear of falling that you make that decision again to skip that step. This is the pivotal moment that could end it all.
Well this is quite the outlook. You really do tend to just focus on bits of advice like that often without exploring the full range of consequences that can occur from things like that so this is quite a bit of advice to see in terms of how one can go about facing a situation like that and learning both to process it and to then move forward with it.
Instead of becoming too overwhelmed, however, you get another opinion from someone but there is no one around. So you just start screaming “help” then out of nowhere a voice says “take the extra rope and make a way to scare the snake.” As you do this, you start to worry the snake will fall on you. This voice replies “is it better to be at the ground again?” Confidence is restored. You get passed the snake and after a few more steps you are out of the hole without thinking. A bright smile widens on your face. You look higher and inside say”Thank you for the courage, confidence, and patience.
OOoh this is a lovely ending to proceedings here. I feel it does an excellent job of tidying things up with respect to the ideas you establish earlier and it truly is quite a beautiful message to consider. Overall I find this work stands out quite a bit amongst others like it, going down a slightly different path and yet telling us a wonderful message to carry forward into life all the same. Very nicely done.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Kate
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