Hey, here for a review and I am so glad i clicked on it. the emotions i felt from this piece are indescribable but i will try.
I was meant to watch the lands.
I was meant to guard my men
And yet I was watching the stars
Praying to hold your hands once more.
These lines!!! they are portrayed so beautifully. the ache for the loved one is so raw. you know your responsibilities and you're performing them with everything in you but still you can't help but miss that one person, actually it could be more than one and it could be anyone, your family, friends , your spouse, your children. but you are going to stay on the front and protect them and your people.
Fearing this could be my last word;
To describe these feelings the alphabet cannot.
how heart-wrenching this is!! you have described this incredibly. the feeling needs no alphabets or words, they just need to be felt.
‘I want to come home
And see your face again.’
That was all he wrote
Until the page burns into nothing
along with him as well.
He died .whyyy? this is so sad. we knew that this would happen eventually but still it hurts.
overall, its a great poem, keep it up.
excited for more.
thank you
lolita
Points: 77
Reviews: 8
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