Young Writers Society

Hey, here to leave a quick review.

I really enjoyed this poem. You use great visual language to evoke images.

"The ruby liquid dropped to the white tile."

I loved this line. Not only does it conjure up a vivid image in my mind, but it also causes me to think deeper. "Ruby liquid" can be interpreted as not only ruby in color but also in value. It makes me think the narrator is losing a valuable part of themselves in this love.

Overall great job. Keep it up!

Nice poem written by the author.
The title is quite interesting and unique, because of which I read rest of the poem.

"Love is a Monster
Love will make you bleed.
Love will make you scream in pain.
Love will make you scream in ecstasy.
Love is scary."
True, love is, has always been a mix of pain and pleasure both at the same time which sometimes gets hard for us to handle, but when it gets out of hand and we cannot control it, it becomes scary. The old horrifying memories haunt us, but we should let the past be the past because it is gone.
And everything happens for a good reason.

You could try writing bit lengthy poem next time (this is just a suggestion; rest is your wish).

Keep it up.
Waiting for more.
Thank you.

Hi, I dropped by because the title interested me, and reading this has given me thoughts I’d like to tell you!

First, wow, the onomatopoeias and the way you wrote them were so amazing!

Drip-

Drip-

Drip.

Blood runs cold as the words make their way to me.

I freeze in motion as they reach my head, my heart, my soul.