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Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Unless you obey and cut all ties with Josephine, you will no longer be allowed in the Underworld. I do not take well to the ...

I have finally returned! Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Overall, writing was beautiful. A bit of nerdy rambling here…I was so hyped to read this chapter that I just had ...

RazorSharpPencil -> Razor

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary It’d was like the entire world was being split apart and reassembled. Like her bones were no longer in her flesh, simply suspended within. I ...

Taking place in modern-day South Korea, one day, Nuri encounters a mysterious, ethereal blonde-haired boy. Who is he? How did end up in enher house??

Alright, mine is up! whenever you guys have the time, you can let me know what you think, and if you want to suggest a change, I can edit it ...

Thank you again for requesting a review on my review page! Now, let’s get into this glorious story! Hello there! ~ Writing Commentary James brushed his hands together. The toasty ...

V Angelus The long stretch of empty road was dark as the sun continuously faded from the sky, leaving only a pattern of amber, blush, and deep purple between the ...

Hello, branching, and welcome to YWS! It's been a very long time since I've reviewed anything, but your title caught my eye. I'm a student worker at my university's archives ...

Okay... @Book! When you have a spare moment, you should introduce your character in the story! Grif, Golux, and I have already written something... :)

#29 Anime Betrayal Poetic Style - 1 - Freeverse Inspiration - 4 - Song Lyric Coin Flip - Tails - Incorporate Into Poem Lyric: "I am exploding with rage" I ...

Hi!! Dropping for a quick review here! I want to start out by saying that I really enjoyed reading your story! It was so humorous and funny, it left me ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : OOoh well this is quite the set of ...

4, 2, 1 My hands are like asphalt. Someone could skin their knees on my palm, and the blood would be a fraction of my stains. But you clasp them ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : Well this was quite the little tale here. ...

Hello Hello, I hope you dont mind me popping in with a review. It might not be most in-depth I hope that can be forgiven. This is a short but ...