Young Writers Society

Ze Lady of Mystery here to review! First Impressions I like how you start with this line "Atheron was intimidating" and then go one to tell us why it's intimidating. ...

Ze Lady of Mystery here to review! It's been a moment so my apologies, I'm a bit rusty. I figured I'd start from here. Since your first 20 or so ...

I'm free this evening and tonight, as well as tomorrow evening

Okay, I'll get a second character ASAP

A short story of an un-hardened heart, set during the Schneider Trophy Cup air races of the 1920s. This would be such a good movie...

Adam DeYoung & Jaegar Magnus There was still a problem with his engine. Quite literally, his engine. You're probably expecting that he'd he good at this. But he was an ...

a bunch of lovesick/heartful poetry

Okay- so I had an idea for character(s); Three "triplets" (or maybe a set of twins-) who aren't actually related but are basically siblings in all but blood. They pretend ...

Hello Again, My Friend! Ooou, I enjoyed this short introduction for Nina ~ Right off the bat, it sounds like she's very frustrated at her family and being forced to ...

Excellent poem! I'm not very good at talkin about poetry, but let's do it anyway. I love how there is always talk about masks and why we hide behind them. ...

Hi! I'm here again, and again with the aim of leaving a review (which will hopefully be less chaotic than the previous one). I see our little one is all ...

Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the spooky S’more? Top Graham Cracker - Rose is healing from Sloth, but she doesn’t ...

My little sister likes my Keith mask so I'm making her a mask with one of her ocs. Her name is Bun-Bun [Image ID: A white cardboard rabbit mask with ...

Hi there!! The following are all - I believe - great options for what I can use to design the cover page for my novel Mage ( which you are ...

Hi!! Dropping in for a quick review here! I would like to start out by saying that I quite enjoyed reading this first chapter of yours. It's a very intriguing ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : Well this is setup quite neatly here, loving ...