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Memories up in the Attic



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Sat Dec 17, 2011 2:14 am
AlfredSymon says...



Hello readers! Before reading the poem, I would like to tell you thank you for lending you're time into reading this piece. If ever you liked it, please comment on it and tell something about it. If there a re concerns you would like me to know like grammar and such, please comment also. And if you did like the poem please click Like on the post and tell you're friends about it, I would gladly appreciate it. Truly everyone's, Al.

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I still haven't forgotten her. I know she read my letter up there, but that's not enough to satisfy me. I remembered the box of trinkets we hid in the attic. And in my desperation and longing for her, I climbed up the stairs and opened the box of memories.



1 I went up the attic one afternoon
In search of something to while my day.
When I dusted here and there
I found myself a box of gray.

2 A thin layer of what seems like ash
Blanketed the box’s carton flaps.
I opened it; lint drifted all around
In its inner darkness are tiny gaps.

3 Each hole is a puzzle piece
That makes one life whole.
With a trembling arm, I reached for them,
She’ll last, if only time was not as cruel.

4 These are what I saw inside:
Trinkets of red and blue,
Gems and jewels; shattered, they were
Her linens which lost their hue,
Letters I never had sent,
Ribbons and laces that tied her braid,
Nickels and quarters we had once bent,
Vividly realistic flowers she cared for
(I never told her they were plastic),
A cherub figurine that heals the heart’s sore,
Beach towels drizzled with sand,
Parasols sewn with lace, colored white,
The flute she used in our two-man band,
And the few novels that kept her alive,
Sadly, they were never enough
To help her survive.

5 I’d rather close the box
Than to see everything she left.
The tiny puzzle pieces;
The cruel things that made such heft.

6 These are the memories she left me,
Little things that made me whole.
And now that I saw them again,
I remembered that I was a fool.

7 I hold onto her, tightly but gently
Within these lost treasures,
I am sure we’ll meet again,
Someday in the land of all pleasures.
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In a hole in the ground there lived a hobbit. Not a nasty, dirty, wet hole, filled with the ends of worms and an oozy smell, nor yet a dry, bare, sandy hole with nothing in it to sit down on or to eat: it was a hobbit-hole, and that means comfort.
— JRR Tolkien