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Sat Sep 01, 2007 5:17 pm
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thething912 says...



I'm writing one about polar bears that stock people, one about a man that lose touch with reality and one about a man that stops the bombing on Japan.
  





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Rydia says...



The second one sounds like it might be an interesting plot but you should probably give us more information if you want to get us interested.
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jonny911 says...



By stock do you mean stocks (meaning he collects people) or stalks (meaning he follows them around). I've just never heard of an animal that collects humans (that would be cool though).
Play duos is interesting, but I don't know enough about it to Judge.
Play tres sounds a little generic. And, if no one bombed Japan, WW2 would still be happening, so you have to think a little about that, because a play set in a world with WW2 continuing longer because no one bombed Japan would be interesting.
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Sat Oct 13, 2007 7:43 pm
EnchantressMuffin says...



How do you stock people? Did you mean something else? Like, stalk?

The second one sounds sort of interesting, but I'm pretty sure that I've seen at least a couple of movies with that same plotline. Could you give some more details?

And the third one sounds interesting.

Details would be really nice on all three of these. Please do!

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