This is an amazing story the punchline in great and your characters are so well described and detailed i would love to see more of your work please keep writing i love this story you should send it to an editor i would would totally buy it. You are truley gifted with writing please keep making more chapters i would be much abliged if you did so XD! Please check out my stories if you have time thank you and i love the title it fits so well with the story the puncation could use some work but other than that you are good XD!
I'm working on Chapter four, and I think that it's the best chapter opening I ever done so far. Thank you also, I've been writing since I couls hold a pencil. x3
I liked it! Good job! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Keep writing, Narniafan4ever1
When he bares his teeth, winter meets its death And when he shakes his mane, we shall have spring again'
'Look there she goes that girl is so peculiar. I wonder if she's feeling well. With a dreamy far off look. And her nose stuck in a book' Something my best friend, Drew, said about me
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