Stop pretending like you don't care,
Because I know you do.
I can see the tears that you are trying to hide.
Thanks for looking after me,
But now it's your turn to let it out.
Don't worry, it's okay to cry
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Thanks for looking after me,
But now, it's your turn to let it out. (Just add in a comma after "now")
Don't worry, it's okay to cry.(I think you should just add a period since it is the end of the poem)
qaralynn wrote:Stop pretending like you don't care,
Because I know you do.
I can see the tears that you are trying to hide.
Thanks for looking after me,
But now it's your turn to let it out.
Don't worry, it's okay to cry
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