Young Writers Society

Days teach me
To always dream
However, it may never come true
But that's the best way
To live my life through.

Days teach me
To dream so high
Never give up and always try
Never let go or say goodbye.

Days teach me
That when there is darkness
For sure, dawn is the next
And when everything is so tiring
For sure there would be time to rest.

Days teach me
To always care for a friend
Always be true and never pretend
Always love without an end
And the broken hearts to try and mend.

Days teach me
To never feel the hate
Always to be confident and never hesitate
Always believe in fate.

Days teach me
That lovers meet and stay together
And others are apart.
So if you are one who has been left behind
Don't cry and suffer
Just search for a new start.

Days teach me
The past I must forget
And nothing needs my regret.

Days teach me
To open my heart and forgive
Cause that will help me to survive and live.

Days teach me
To always offer my helping hand
And never doubt in people when there is no proof
And always try to understand.

Days teach me
Not to be shy
If I have done something wrong
But to admit it and be proud that I have learned
A lesson that will help me to be strong.

Just one word....

Beautiful! <3

~Sol Valeria

Hello, I'm WriteWriter and I will be reviewing this poem. This poem really has nothing bad to talk about, it flowed with emotion and the words were just right in flowing off the page I really can't see anything wrong as far as grammar goes which makes me happy because I'm not a big fan of improper grammar. This poem really has some meaning and I'll bet that anyone else that reads it will say the same. That's all I have to say for now. Great job and forever may you write.

This is such a lovely poem. A lot of positivity and inspiration has been blended here with a good flow of words and meaning. I like poems like this. The subtle rhyming and the context behind each stanza is very nice. This poem definitely teaches us a lot and everyone should have a look at this. I don't really have any nitpicks but I did find a few places that could have been better polished. I don't really like changing or trying to correct others' poems but I always say this - Go through the lines again and again. You will definitely find new ways to make your poem more appealing. With a little more practice, you'll be a wonderful poetess.

I greatly enjoyed this poem and thank you for sharing it. Keep the ink flowing!

I agree with everyone else,
I have no problems with it.
I absolutely loved it.
No corrections,

Nicely done!

Sincerely,
Ciara<3

Days teach me
To always dream
However, it may never come true
But that's the best way
To live my life through.

Days teach me
To dream so high
Never give up and always try
Never let go or say goodbye.

Days teach me
That when there is darkness
For sure, dawn is the next
And when everything is so tiring
For sure there would be time to rest.

Days teach me
To always care for a friend
Always be true and never pretend
Always love without an end
And the broken hearts to try and mend.

Days teach me
To never feel the hate
Always to be confident and never hesitate
Always believe in fate.

Days teach me
That lovers meet and stay together
And others are apart.
So if you are one who has been left behind
Don't cry and suffer
Just search for a new start.

Days teach me
The past I must forget
And nothing needs my regret.

Days teach me
To open my heart and forgive
Cause that will help me to survive and live.

Days teach me
To always offer my helping hand
And never doubt in people when there is no proof
And always try to understand.

Days teach me
Not to be shy
If I have done something wrong
But to admit it and be proud that I have learned
A lesson that will help me to be strong.


Hello, I'm Misfit and I LOVE this piece! It's so full of truth I envy you. Thank you for putting this up. For I have nothing of the negatory to say towards this piece. It's just so beautiful. I'm gonna go read your other stuff now. Until next time.


~ Misfit ~

"Days teach me
To always dream
However, it may never come true
But that's the best way
To live my life through."

Should be:
"Days teach me
To always dream.
Though, it may never come true
It is the best way
to live my life through."