There was a young prince, George the Great, Who swore like a bloody first mate. His mother's last hope was to call in the Pope - He gave George an R18 rate.
Last edited by barefootrunner on Wed Nov 30, 2011 9:03 am, edited 1 time in total.
"Not everything that counts can be counted, and not everything that can be counted counts" - Einstein
This is sweet and funny, I liked it. Only thing is I'd put "There was a young prince, George the Great" and add a coma after pince. I know thats really nit picky but it would ust break up the line nicely.
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There was a young prince, George the Great, Who swore like a bloody first mate. His mother's last hope was to call in the Pope - He gave George an R18 rate.
Loved it! It was funny, light hearted and just, nice. It's cute, well done!
About your poem *giggle* Limerick 1, well it's so darn funny!
It's so hard to comment on short works like this one, the reason for this is that there are less grammatical mistakes. I can classify these type of poems as OHKO or One-hit Knockout. In just five verses, you made a short story, a clever parody, a cut prose and a witty joke. The poem made such an impact in few words
Tip: Since your poem's a bit short, try to add images, graphics, text designs or any other additives to your post so that readers can stay in a little while longer
Truly not yours, Al
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