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Fri Dec 06, 2019 7:50 pm
Miraculor77 says...



I would really appreciate it if you could review my essay. I wrote it for a school assignment and am in a desperate need for feedback.

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Comparison between Fahrenheit 451's Society and Ours - an essay

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Sat May 30, 2020 3:21 pm
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Starve says...



Hi Mea !

I really like the reviews I've received from you, I was hoping you could review the second draft of this first villanelle I wrote — Last walk (2nd draft)

I don't need anything too detailed , just some main pointers for a next draft. I'm just trying to perfect the work since editing is my weak point.

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Sun Jun 21, 2020 6:54 pm
KateHardy says...



Hi @Mea,

Are you still accepting requests?

If you are could you take a look at this chapter of my novel: The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 3
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The Princess of Darkness

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Sun Feb 14, 2021 6:55 pm
Zenith says...



Hi Mea!
If you're accepting review requests, I'd be really grateful if you could review my short story Thought Patterns
Thank you for your time in advance. :)
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Wed Feb 24, 2021 4:12 am
vannilawriter says...



Please review this short story/ flash fiction (depending on your definition of either one) a friend of mine has asked me to write this for her art exibit, and I really wanna iron it out for her.

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It is only a novel... or, in short, only some work in which the greatest powers of the mind are displayed, in which the most thorough knowledge of human nature, the happiest delineation of its varieties, the liveliest effusions of wit and humour, are conveyed to the world in the best-chosen language
— Jane Austen, Northanger Abbey