Hey man. Could you review my work. I promise it will get happier as times goes on. Give it a chance please. Picking through the Rubble-Part 1 Thanks man.
Hey @fishre! I would love to review your piece, but it's a bit long for me! (50 pages in fact) I have a limited time to review in, and I want to make sure I give you a full and well-thought-out review, so if you could split it into smaller pieces (preferably under 5 thousand words) or find a smaller piece you want me to review, that'd be swell!
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