Hi, I would love it if you could help me out with a review on my short story Hypoxia. It's been a while since I've written in this medium so I'm trying to shake the rust off and feedback really helps. Thanks in advance
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be still, sad heart, and cease repining behind the clouds is the sun still shining
looseleaf wrote:Sorry for the late response, @Fishr, but I'll try to get to it this weekend! (poke me on Monday if I haven't done it yet ))
Heh. So. I did some editing, and now I’m not sure if it is qualified as a short story anymore. But if you want to give it a go, I’m most interested in character development. Memento Mori
hiya! No idea if this is still open, but if it is, I'd love if you'd review the opening chapter to my novel: Wakefield, Wyoming. 1941. As of typing, there's zero reviews and there's only a slight reference to blood and such, so hopefully that falls in line with your requirements. Thanks for considering!
Hi Looseleaf!! If you have the time, I'd really appreciate a review of my new poem. Just so you know, it is centering around politics, but it's nothing detailed just a reflection. Here's the link!!
I always knew that deep down in every human heart, there is mercy and generosity. No one is born hating another person because of the color of his skin, or his background, or his religion. People must learn to hate, and if they can learn to hate, they can be taught to love, for love comes more naturally to the human heart than its opposite. — Nelson Mandela, Long Walk to Freedom
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