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Thu Oct 07, 2021 4:43 pm
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lukekazey says...



Hi y'all!

If you're wanting a review on your work, then you've come to the right place.

I review poetry and short stories mainly, but if there's anything besides that that you'd like reviewing, pop in a request and I'll let you know whether I can review it or not.

I will NOT review novels/chapters (sorry).

I don't require anything in exchange for my reviews, but if you are so inclined, please feel free to review any of my poems, that's always appreciated.

My general review structure is: what I liked, suggestions for improvement, and finally a general overview. (I sometimes start with my interpretation of the piece as well, just depends)

Feel free to look at some of my previous reviews, and if I look and sound like someone you'd like a review from, then please drop a request below.

Yours,
Luke
  





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Fri Oct 08, 2021 3:17 am
AlyTheBookworm says...



Hey Luke!

Could you please review my most recent poem Infancy? Also, let me know which poem of yours you'd like me to review in return c:
  





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Fri Oct 08, 2021 7:27 am
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lukekazey says...



Of course @AlyTheBookworm ! and honestly, I don't mind, whichever takes your fancy, or none of them at all :)
  





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Sun Dec 18, 2022 12:13 am
elli4975 says...



I think you'll enjoy my short story that incorporates poetry too! A Warm Embrace
  





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Fri Jan 06, 2023 10:26 am
Mikatsune says...



Hello, could you please review my short story (The AI War)? Thank you very much!
This is my first published work, so it may not be so good. :shock:
  








It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien