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Tue Apr 30, 2024 1:23 am
Rose says...



Spoiler! :
Ooh!! From the first poems you posted on YWS to these! They are so beautiful indeed^^ And also fancy in a way, elegant really <33
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21 - Giver
John 3:16
For God so loved the world that He gave His one and only Son, that whoever believes in Him shall not perish but have eternal life
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He gave us a gift we could never repay
His only Son, the innocent lamb
Hysterical cries from mother Mary and more
Witnessing the Messiah be hung for no crime
His blood on the cross shed great for our sin
The empty tomb to win over all evil and death
He gave us grace in the form of our own kind
I will praise and be overjoyed by gratitude for
All that He has given, from the bread of His flesh
To the promise of eternal life
Thank You, Lord
  





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22 - Shepherd
Isaiah 40:11
He tends His flock like a shepherd:
He gathers the lambs in His arms
and carries them close to His heart;
He gently leads those that have young.


What a cause for celebration it is
To be a flock of sheep, together and growing
When He speaks, we recognize His voice
We know His will for us, we draw near
For He provides, protects, and loves us dearly
Leading us through every path, rocky or calm
He saves those lost and trembling, standing alone
He calls their name and they know
They are seen, heard, and never to be alone again
What a beautiful thing it is
To be found sheep loved by a gracious shepherd
  





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23 - Wrathful
Nahum 1:2
The Lord is a jealous and avenging God; the Lord takes vengeance and is filled with wrath. The Lord takes vengeance on His foes and vents His wrath against His enemies.


Wrath.
What an evocative word
that we love to shy away from.
Don’t we feel it too, though:
An anger rising like a tsunami
until it takes our enemies,
and us too, down til we are bodies
washed up on shores.
But what good does our wrath do?
A pitifully selfish thing it is, really,
swaying us away from all things good.
We are not little gods.
But because our wrath will never be truly upright,
we need a judge whose anger is perfect in nature,
a wrath not to make us hidden and scared,
but to make us realize the importance of knowing Him.
Do not fear the word wrath, but stay obedient, stay near.
  





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24 - Omniscient
Psalm 147:5
Great is our Lord and mighty in power; His understanding has no limit.


As a kid, we stumble over our explanations
Begging for the other to just hear us out
But with You, silence can be communication
When my cries are quiet yet my pain is so loud
Your listening ear gives comfort in any situation
For You know all until my voice is again found
  





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25 - Omnipresence
Proverbs 15:3
The eyes of the Lord are everywhere, keeping watch on the wicked and the good.


You are in the veins of every leaf, in every cloud in the sky
In the winds that in my hair I feel swiftly passing through
Every surface or expanse we see contains your careful eye
Watching us, protecting us, so we may not stray from truth
You see my heart, my joys, my pain, and the sin I try to hide
Whether we make ourselves big or small, we cannot shy away from you
  





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26 - Omnipotent
Matthew 19:26
Jesus looked at them and said, “With man this is impossible, but with God all things are possible.”


Not a wizard, a genie, or witch
Your power fully divine and pure
Able to do all without even a flick
I’m amazed at how much I’ve endured
At the hands of yours, so perfect
With you my faith is sealed and secure
  





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27 - Father
1 Corinthians 8:6
Yet for us there is but one God, the Father, from whom all things came and for whom we live; and there is but one Lord, Jesus Christ, through whom all things came and through whom we live.


The orphans find a home
In the arms of The Father
Who created all things good;
Light, flowers, joy, and butterflies
Those lonely and fatherless
Find refuge in one who will, could,
Never abandon nor forsake
May we take comfort in His
Fatherly, undying, love for us
Strays who heard the calling
And ran to our new home
  





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28 - Son/Man
1 John 5:20
We know also that the Son of God has come and has given us understanding, so that we may know him who is true. And we are in him who is true by being in his Son Jesus Christ. He is the true God and eternal life.


A man made from dust, we are,
Created in the image of Him
Who came down, graced this
Earth for too short
His beauty of wisdom and love
Unmatched to any goddess
We carve by hand
And He fulfilled hundred-year
Prophesies, He gives hope
For a life after death
And yet we took Him for
Granted, put Him on that
Cross, cried wolf on the lamb
Who uttered forgiveness with
His last breaths
My tongue tied in astonishment
My lips crying out in praise
Of Jesus of Nazareth
Our Christ and our Lord
Yours, Fleur ♡
Hebrews 13:8 - Jesus Christ is the same yesterday, today, and forever
~ Was previously Lullaby ~
  





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29 - Holy Spirit
John 14:26
But the Advocate, the Holy Spirit, whom the Father will send in my name, will teach you all things and will remind you of everything I have said to you.


Like a rose blooming in my soul
Like an ember catching flame in my belly
Like a light painting over the bruises on my heart

I feel His spirit dwelling within me

My thoughts of discernment reigned by His whisper
My eyes become open, enlightened to all color
My tongue tamed, quiet and meek

And none of it is from my own doing or work

Praise be to God for His spirit who has
Changed me into a new creation
One so enamored by His glory—a moth drawn

The dove who came down is here to stay forever
  





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30 - "I AM"
Exodus 3:14
God said to Moses, “I am who I am. This is what you are to say to the Israelites: ‘I am has sent me to you.’”


What an overwhelmingly beautiful thought
Of the everlasting God and His presence
For He is the good, He is the way, He is the dawn

He makes it all possible, even the lame to walk
Through His grace we are gifted His guidance
What an overwhelmingly beautiful thought

Nothing from His being can be flawed
His elegance covers every inch of expanse
For He is the good, He is the way, He is the dawn

To the wrongful who simply sit and scoff
He is loving to forgive through our repentance
What an overwhelmingly beautiful thought

We are the beings for which He has called
Our faithfulness must not cower in silence
Through Him we can comfort those distraught

Nothing could make me in more awe
Than everything that makes up His essence
What an overwhelmingly beautiful thought
For He is the good, He is the way, He is the dawn
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Dear Everyone Who Read This Thread,
Thank you. I don't commonly write religious or spiritual poetry, but through doing this I have learned how much I love it as it allows me to use my passion to glorify God. It was very important to me that I finished the thread even if it meant being done in May, unfortunately that was the case. But I am so thankful I got to write these poems and share them with you guys! I hope and pray that it inspired at least one of you, for God loves you and us so so much. I don't have much to say except thank you for the patience on this and for the dedication to those who have read all 30 poems.
Much love and appreciation,
Fleur ❀♡
  





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I just love the whole concept and execution of this! Such a wonderful thread to read - thank you for sharing your faith and reflections through such thoughtful poetry! Congratulations on completing NaPo too! <3
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