Young Writers Society

It was dark. Looking around, everything was rubble. The entire place lay in ruins, buildings had crumbled. Walls were completely destroyed, and the water beds dried out. The plants, brown and dead, or dying. As he walked to the center of the area, he found a small square with a pedestal in the very center. Maybe where a statue was once placed. However the statue was, like everything else, broken. The once the perfect image of a person, but only those who knew would ever be able to tell who the statue was meant to be.

Curled up at the foot of the statue was a small figure, a boy, more a young man. Sobbing inconsolably, repeatedly asking a question, that could never be satisfyingly answered "Why..?"

It was dark. Looking around, everything was rubble. The entire place lay in ruins, buildings had crumbled. Walls were completely destroyed, and the water beds dried out. The plants, brown and dead, or dying. As he walked to the center of the area, he found a small square with a pedestal in the very center. Maybe where a statue was once placed. However the statue was, like everything else, broken. The once the perfect image of a person, but only those who knew would ever be able to tell who the statue was meant to be.

Curled up at the foot of the statue was a small figure,a boy, more a young man. Sobbing inconsolably, repeatedly asking a question, that could never be satisfyingly answered "Why..?"

This was pretty short. Not sure exactly what you wanted to do with this, but I think it has potential. could use a tad more description, and some lengthening. As it is, there isn't much of a plotline. Make something else happen!

I liked it. Could use some work, but could be very interesting.........

P.S. Love the siggy

Okay, to tell you the truth, it was too short.
I dint know whar you were trying to do but okay.

The beginning, everything was destroyd. Where's the romance in this?

I wasn't really happy about this, sorry.

I enjoyed it. I don't see what it has to do with romantic fiction but i thought it was prety cool. I would have posted it in Poetry...