Hey,
I lovelovelovvvve this piece. From the first sentence, I knew it would be good. I *kind* of expected the ending though, especially when you said Aden was disturbed and that his hair was so much like Charlotte's. So incest, eh? That's pretty screwed up but makes wonderful short stories. I figured this was a stand alone when I read it but everyone else was like 'PM me when you have more!' so I was kind of like 'o.0?'. I don't think you should have more and I don't think you are; I mean it's in SHORT STORY for a reason. Overall, amazing piece. I'm going to look out for more stuff by you. "D
Favorite Line: The difference between Charlotte and me is that Charlotte is strong and I am weak. This is why I cut myself last night. This is why Charlotte’s skin is whole. This is why I’m on a hundred different medications for depression and PTSD. This is why she smiles. This is why I frown.
Grade: A+
~Jas
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