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Mon Sep 25, 2006 4:50 am
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Mon Sep 25, 2006 6:16 pm
Kay Kay says...



I absolutely love it. The only thing i would change is more detail about the surroundings and what exactly they are doing. I think it was sweet.
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Mon Sep 25, 2006 6:18 pm
Wiggy says...



It's awesome!!!! Like I've stated time and time again, I love your work Brad. :D

Wiggy ;)
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Mon Sep 25, 2006 7:51 pm
Cameron says...



You have to be careful when you write romance novels that you don't settle into an overused cliche. That's all I have to say.
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Mon Sep 25, 2006 8:09 pm
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Clumpy?

I want to fall in love again.
  








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