Whenever prose features I am inclined to read it, and for the most part I wonder why it is featured at all. This vignette, if I can call it that, is pretty damn cliché isn't it? Stock fall of worn lines and the same old fluff common to work of this nature. Rather predictable and trite, too. I do see why this featured though, it is well written and it is short, and that is usually enough. There is something at the heart of it, though it is rather watered down. Something almost mute, seems to resound, but I doubt I will lose sleep over it. It's a sweet little romp, then we move on.
But, like I said, the writing is decent. I must commend you on that at least.
It was very short and to the point and it had such great imagery, despite its few words. I like that you didn't give them names. I don't know why I've always loved that, when authors don't name their characters. It's just kind of cool. Anyways, I also liked the simple things in it, like smoking the same cigarette and wearing his jacket. Very cool. I disagree with you in your spoiler; I think it's very creative and not too cliche. All in all, very lovely piece. I have no complaints. I haven't read anything in awhile on YWS and this was the first one I checked out in a long time. You made my night 
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