Chapter 1
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Taylor's hair flowed as she ran through the freezing snow, her entire body shaking but that couldnt slow her down, her light blue eyes shined even though the cold made her eyes water.
"Elizabeth! Can you believe how much snow we've gotten? It's the most I've seen my whole life!"
"Oh Taylor don't you remember we had this much last year?"
"Oh never mind that we have to go sledding, Mama let me barrow the sled for an hour before I have to get back so we must go now."
"Oh Taylor I'd love to but my sister Jane is horibly sick! Ma won't let me go anywhere, I have to go before she notices me missing, I'll see you at school."
Taylor started back home but because she had an hour she stayed outside knowing that if she went in mama would make her get to work. She went over near the lake and stared in amassment at the frozen water.
She suddenly jumped when she felt a hand on her shoulder,"LUKE how many times have I told you don't sneak up on me!"
"Aww why not if I said something it would take all of the fun out of it"
"do you think I care if it ruins your fun? You almost made me fall in the lake, you know the ice wouldn't be strong enough to hold me"
" I'm sorry Taylor I won't do it again I promise!"
" Good, now what would you like?"
"Well I was wondering if you heard about the winter ball?"
"I do mama is already starting on my dress"
" Well I thought maybe, if you wanted, you might come to it with me?"
"Well.... I don't know, I'll have to ask if I can"
"Oh..... Well okay will you tell me once you have your answer"
"Okay, well I'll see you at school tomorrow, I have to go, bye Luke"
" Bye.."
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