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Write the worst poem you can.



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Sat Apr 20, 2024 1:39 am
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Spearmint says...



cliched love poem

roses are red,
violets are blue,
sugar is sweet,
and so are you.
your eyes shine like stars,
in my stomach, butterflies fight wars,
seeing you is always a treat,
and i feel sad when you're on mars.
you make my heart start to thump,
as if i'm driving over a bump,
and i like the way you make my heart beat,
the only thing is, in my throat there is a lump.
because clearly i'm breathless at your beauty,
and you have stolen all the wind from me,
you thief, you eater of meat,
and now all i can do is sit here and be.
mint, she/her


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Fri May 10, 2024 11:09 am
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herbalhour says...



the worst poem you can
the worst poem you can
kinda sounds like the worst home for a toucan
and that must be sad for the toucan
because it really like the worst poem you can (make)
but it's stuck in it's own worst home (for a toucan)
so it's sad.
nothing is forever but everything was infinite

herb/tea - he/him/his, she/her/hers
  





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Fri May 10, 2024 11:44 am
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keeperofgaming says...



In the ancient ground.
I hear a big scary sound.
So I fall and cry.
  





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Mon May 27, 2024 10:24 am
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Liminality says...



Some people just want to multi-class in real life,
like trying to master all the forms of structured poetry
while being a free verse poet,
or trying to make friends with everyone on the planet.
I know nothing about such people,
and I am such people, but I am also not
trying to make friends with everyone on the planet.
she/her

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Mon May 27, 2024 10:31 am
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fatherfig says...



dodging sleep like bullets
night turn to morning
mourning time lost when wasting it
i see myself in you
that is an insult
i love you
that is also an insult
good night
that is not an insult
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  








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